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What could I have done to make you love me?
What could I have done to make you cry for me?
What could I have done to make you think of me?
What could I have done to make you die for me?

What could I have done to make you hear me?
There were so many things that we should've said, but we were too busy watching the sky.
What could I have done to make you fear me?
The easiest way out was to say goodbye.
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I love the repetition, it really drives home the emotion behind the poem.
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:iconfirewater409:
Oh, thank you. I appreciate that a lot. c:
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!Midnight---Wolf Jul 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL :happycry:
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